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first of all, i'm a HUGE fan of yours. regarding your content, you made interesting choices. there are obvious christian connotations regarding the crucifix. instead, i wonder if your use of the cross is more subtle, i.e. the intersection of space and time, life/death, the birth of duality, or male - spiritual(vertical) and female - earthly(horizontal). formally, the composition is diagonal - nice choice. i'm transfixed on your figure. however, to add importance, i'd use more value contrast and gradations. be specific regarding your light source and shadows. currently, you have multiple(arbitrary) light sources, i.e. the figure's shadow doesn't match the lighting on the crosses. i'd vary my line strength - darker lines for closer objects and lighter lines for distant objects. also, i'd use more perspective on the rectilinear crosses - both atmospheric and vanishing points. VERY INTERESTING AND NICE JOB!
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:iconred-izak:
mi sie podoba. moze nie powinien miec tak rozszerzonych nog, ale spoko pracka

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"I've always been mad, I know I've been mad, like the
most of us...very hard to explain why you're mad, even
if you're not mad..."
:iconogonka:
... Harry Potter xDDD

Świetne :D

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Metallica - To live is to Die :horns:

When a Man Lies, He Murders
Some Part of the World.

These Are the Pale Deaths Which
Men Miscall Their Lives.

All this I Cannot Bear
to Witness Any Longer.

Cannot the Kingdom of Salvation
Take Me Home?
:iconroxiwolf1:
Szyja za gruba.
Bardzo mi się podoba o płaszcz i tło ^.^

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Waaa 8D
:iconogonka:
A krzyże mi się kojarzą z Master Of Puppets :D

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Metallica - To live is to Die :horns:

When a Man Lies, He Murders
Some Part of the World.

These Are the Pale Deaths Which
Men Miscall Their Lives.

All this I Cannot Bear
to Witness Any Longer.

Cannot the Kingdom of Salvation
Take Me Home?
:iconlisa601:
o kurcze.. świetneee.. *w*

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Billy! <3
:iconthesweetnightmare:
Mi z kolei najbardziej podoba sie charakter tej pracy :D

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Sorry for my english ^^;
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Dzieci nie są złośliwe, są złe.
~ Zygmunt Freud
:icondk-raven:
Twarz super i tło genialne!
Czyli wciąż podziwiam twój kunszt akwarelowy :aww:

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"Just the other night
I thought I heard you cry
Asking me to come
And hold you in my arms
I can hear your prayers
Your burdens I will bear
But first I need your hand
Then forever can begin..."
:iconspiritofthefire:
poza trochę nienaturalna, ale reszta jest ok ^^
Podoba mi się trawa

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Like a ninja
:iconshar-vampire:
Amerykański cmentarz wojskowy?

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† My vampirical husband ~FirenSephir :heart:

V"""V
A.....A Nosgothic vampiress, beware mortal soul! :blackrose:
:iconalona93:
Bardzo mi się podoba.Chciałabym umieć rysować ludzi.No a przynajmniej samą siebie xD

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School (Skull oO?)!! oO *zawal*
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